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Names and Aliases[]

I recently updates the names and aliases section of the LaCroix entry due to excessive headings. Rarely, if ever, should headings be immediately followed by a lower level heading. In almost all cases, text can be written such that there is descriptive information above each heading that helps clarify why the sections are being made. Without them, sometimes the demarcations can be jarring and confusing.

I clarified some of the information in the roman naming practices section, as the use of the Latin structures are not something typical readers are used to. I'd like to think that our readers are of the "upper crust" in education, but some people may still not be familiar with the minutia of the language, which I felt the section was bordering on. I also reordered some of the sentences in this section to place a stronger emphasis on *why* the information was there on naming practices, as it wasn't, I felt, immediately apparent.

Finally, I corrected some small typographical and grammatical anomalies. --Kodia 15:14, 13 January 2009 (UTC)

Looks good. -- Greer Watson 21:03, 13 January 2009 (UTC)